From my crit feedback It was clear that I needed to make some adjustments such as spelling mistakes. I also need to make a smaller book for the words as this is something that has been mentioned in this crit and that I think would be useful. other things to address are the belly band and more info in the tips book.
I had planned on making a keyring of words before the final crit but ran out of time, so I am glad it was something that was brought up as I now know that this smaller booklet of words is essential.
I have also decided to add more content to the tips book, at first I didn't want it to be too overpowering filled with tips but as my audience has now said they'd want more tips i am able to use more that I generated from my research.
When I looked at the cover of the booklets it made me feel really negatively towards them, like they looked dull and boring because of the grey ( even thought I love the colour grey, the mixture of grey with academic booklets really didn't work) So i have decided to add a cream colour into the equation, which is a lot more fresh and alive and stands out more as there is a higher contrast between the black and cream. I will still keep elements of grey as I feel the cream and grey work in unison and make the finished outcome look professional like context of practice should be. I have also added a brief intro page as this is something that was suggested in the crit.
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